Investor pitch narrative

A straight line through your facts,
with the inflation removed.

You have the business facts; what is missing is the line that carries them. We restructure your material into problem, solution, evidence, and ask, and cut adjectives nothing supports. Funding amounts, valuations, growth curves, and market judgements are yours to fill in — we leave the slots.

Evidence firstAssumptions labelledNo invented figures

Review the result

Your result will appear here

We build the four sections, remove inflated wording, and list the figures you must supply and the assumptions worth verifying.

SAMPLE OUTPUT

Here is exactly what you receive.

This is the complete output for the source text in the demo above: a narrative score, itemised reasoning, the figures you must supply and assumptions to verify, and the restructured draft. It is a demonstration, not a customer case.

SAMPLE

Restructure result (sample)

Narrative score88/100

+50

Split into problem, solution, evidence, ask

The source was one paragraph of self-description; a reader could not tell demand from progress. Four sections now answer four questions.

Move inflated adjectives out of the body

“Revolutionary”, “the only”, and “extremely fast growth” had no backing. They are removed from the narrative and listed at the end with the reason.

Rewrite the market claim as a sourced assumption

“The market is enormous” cannot be checked. It becomes an assumption that names its basis, and is listed for you to attach a source to.

Restructured narrative

# [COMPANY]: pitch narrative draft

**Problem**: [How the target user solves this today, and specifically where that falls short]

**Solution**: We turn [core action] into [product form], serving [a defined user group].

**Evidence**
- [Something that already happened: launch date, paying customers, retention or revenue]
- [A checkable metric, with its measurement period stated]

**Assumption**: this market grows about [FILL IN] per year, based on [SOURCE]. This is a judgement we have not verified.

**Ask**: raising [AMOUNT] this round for [USE], reaching [GOAL] by [DATE].

**Removed**: revolutionary, enormous market, extremely fast growth, top companies, recognised by many customers, the only platform — the source supported none of them.

WHAT IT DOES

Not inventing a story. Ordering the one you have.

Open with your strongest fact

The first line carries a fact you can evidence, not a vision adjective. It decides whether anyone asks a follow-up.

Write market judgements as assumptions

Market size, growth rate, and competitive position become labelled assumptions with the reason attached, unless you hold primary data.

Swap adjectives for facts

“Revolutionary”, “the only”, “explosive growth” do no evidential work. They become the real number or event behind them, or they go.

WHY IT IS WORTH DOING

Structure is what gets remembered.

Pitch material gets skimmed

Nobody reads it end to end. Without structure your strongest fact sits in the middle where nobody reaches it.

One invented number ends it

A growth rate you cannot source tends to surface during diligence, and costs far more than leaving it out.

A labelled assumption reads better

Saying what you have not verified, and why you believe it, survives questioning far better than a dressed-up conclusion.

Note: a pitch earns credibility from an evidence chain a reader can check; there is no general research result for an optimal pitch structure. This site restructures what you supply. It is not investment, legal, or financial advice and does not predict funding outcomes.

RESTRUCTURE DEMO

One description, two ways of writing it.

Before

Our product is a revolutionary breakthrough in the industry, the market is enormous, and growth is extremely fast. The team comes from top companies, we are recognised by many customers, and we expect to become the only platform in this space. Welcome to discuss this funding round.

Restructured

# [COMPANY]: pitch narrative draft

**Problem**: [How the target user solves this today, and specifically where that falls short]

**Solution**: We turn [core action] into [product form], serving [a defined user group].

**Evidence**
- [Something that already happened: launch date, paying customers, retention or revenue]
- [A checkable metric, with its measurement period stated]

**Assumption**: this market grows about [FILL IN] per year, based on [SOURCE]. This is a judgement we have not verified.

**Ask**: raising [AMOUNT] this round for [USE], reaching [GOAL] by [DATE].

**Removed**: revolutionary, enormous market, extremely fast growth, top companies, recognised by many customers, the only platform — the source supported none of them.

Demo sample: adjectives become slots for facts you hold, the market claim becomes a sourced assumption, and the ask gets its own section. Paste your material to get your version (sign-in required; one credit per run).

WHY YOU CAN TRUST IT

We put “no invented figures” into our product principles.

No fundraising numbers at all

Amounts, valuations, investors, terms, growth curves, competitor comparisons — absent from your source, they stay as slots rather than plausible numbers.

Market judgements must be labelled

Second-hand claims about market size and competitive position appear as assumptions with reasons, never as conclusions.

No funding outcome promised

Whether you raise depends on the business, timing, and market. Any “guaranteed to impress investors” claim is false.

Content is not stored

Submitted text is used for this single AI request and is not intentionally persisted. See the Privacy Policy.

FAQ

Ask these before you pay.

Will you supply growth figures or a valuation?

No. Amounts, valuations, growth rates, and customer counts are your business facts. This site leaves a [FILL IN] slot and never generates a plausible-looking number.

How are market claims handled?

As assumptions. Without a primary source, market size, growth, and competitive position are labelled “assumption” with the reason, and listed for you to verify.

Can you build a financial model or valuation?

No. This site works at the narrative level: no financial model, no valuation calculation, no deck design.

What does one run cost?

One credit per run, usually done in seconds, returning the draft, the reasoning, and items to confirm.

Do credits expire?

No. Credits never expire — whatever you do not use carries over to the next cycle instead of resetting.

Is there batch processing or an API?

Not yet. Each run processes one document and consumes one credit; there is no bulk upload or API today. Email us with your use case and we will assess it.

Is my content stored?

Not intentionally. Text is used for this single AI request only. See the Privacy Policy.

Which material fits?

Business descriptions, progress notes, draft pitches, investor Q&A — anything that needs to become problem, solution, evidence, and ask.

SIMPLE PRICING

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Starter

$9/ month

For an occasional publishing cadence, with a focused monthly credit allocation.

50 optimization credits per monthly renewal
Complete GEO analysis
Chinese and English output
Markdown export

Pro

Recommended$29/ month

For frequent publishers who iterate on content continuously.

250 optimization credits per monthly renewal
Complete GEO analysis
Chinese and English output
Markdown export

Advanced

$79/ month

Our largest monthly credit allocation, for the heaviest continuous usage.

1,000 optimization credits per monthly renewal
Complete GEO analysis
Chinese and English output
Markdown export

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